It’s an awesome idea, but if you make a whole story of it I would pace it a little bit slower. For a oneshot the pace is perfect, but for a longer story, I would use more build up between scenes (like you did in the end when the Tonkes want to think about it).Not often we get a story about an Obscurial Harry Potter, let alone one this good.I’ll Just Wait Until It’s Quiet Skeleton Teacher T-Shirt I would very much like to see this continued.Edit n1 : just found out this content wasn’t written by you, but by the author white squirrel. You really should give credit to the original author
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This is bloody brilliant, as Ron would probably say. You’re an amazing writer – please write more of this! And if you do, can we get to see what happened to Credence, and if there are any Scamander or (Kowalski)-Goldstein kids? Get in there quickly with some good fanfic and perhaps they’ll use it for the films… Firstly, good luck! I’m sure you’ll do an awesome job! Secondly, could you let us know when the first chapter of the sequel is up? Oh shit!! What a Fuckin plot twist that was lol I wonder what happens to the creature now..I’ll Just Wait Until It’s Quiet Skeleton Teacher T-Shirt bring some sage and a cross or whatever other generic stuff works up there.
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Try it all fuck it.I’ll Just Wait Until It’s Quiet Skeleton Teacher T-Shirt Or, even next time you hear it or see it, just hold onto his skull and chuck it at the thing haha or squish it’s eyes. If you get weird enough, I think it will work. Worth a shot though right? Definitely some good ideas, the entity hasn’t made its presence known since this day. I’m going to be speaking speaking the local authorities as I did find a body. I will keep you posted! Just say you were closing up like you told your friends you were going to do (they can even confirm this) when you heard a noise.